Write about a memorable day in your life. Follow the steps:
1. Think about the topic.
2. Make a list of ideas divided in 3 paragraphs, before you write.
3. Follow the structure. Write a different paragraph for each part.
1. Introduction, presentation.
2. Developement
3. End, conclusion
Read about your pals' memorable days and write at least 5 suggestions on any of the paragraphs to improve it. Do it through this document in gogle docs.
http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=d6f8882_184crkq5fd6&hl=es